The Adventures (as promised) :P

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The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by LiL-DeViL » Sun Jun 08, 2008 2:11 pm

Adventure 1:
Over The Hills by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW
Adventure 2:
Bomb Gaps by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW
Adventure 3:
Mountain Getaway by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW
Adventure 4:
Urban Surroundings by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW
Adventure 5:
Madness in the city by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW
Adventure 6:
Chopper escape by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW
Adventure 7:
Through The Tunnels by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW

plus:
Project Gravity by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW

Space Rider by LiL_DeViL : PLAY / PREVIEW

plz post feedback!
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by Isenki » Sun Jun 08, 2008 2:17 pm

They are all good in general, but I think you need to make your tracks longer.
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by LiL-DeViL » Sun Jun 08, 2008 2:23 pm

ok

but i will finish infilitration pt. 2 soon!!!
Plot:
you have turned off and took the core but you gotta escape but there millions of guards out there!!!
To Be Continued :arrow:
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by TheZengo » Sun Jun 08, 2008 2:32 pm

exactly what Isenki says
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by Kreator » Sun Jun 08, 2008 3:45 pm

These are ok. Like Isenki said, these need to be longer. They could also afford to be smoother and more detailed if possible. Take time with your maps, don't just take 1/2 an hour, take 1/2 a day.

In a nutshell:

6.9 out of 10.0
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by LiL-DeViL » Sun Jun 08, 2008 4:06 pm

i will :P :P :P :P :P :P
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by Uni » Sun Jun 08, 2008 4:08 pm

I take about mins with mine, their ok... *comforts my tracks*
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by LiL-DeViL » Mon Jun 09, 2008 1:46 pm

hey uni you a unicycle fan?
(ahem... just asking)
the name.....
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by LiL-DeViL » Mon Jun 09, 2008 1:46 pm

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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by LiL-DeViL » Mon Jun 09, 2008 1:47 pm

uh whoops again
how the hell do i do html?!?!?!?!?!?
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by Kreator » Mon Jun 09, 2008 2:15 pm

hehe... I had the same problem. You have to use the "[]" tags instead of the "<>" tags.

Uni wrote:I take about mins with mine, their ok... *comforts my tracks*


Yes, but only O.K. With half a day they could be great.

EDIT: Or you could just spend half a day making a crap track with to many boosts and bad scenery and so on.
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by LiL-DeViL » Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:50 pm

I DONT UNDERSTAND
Posted by Kreator on Mon Jun 09, 2008 2:15 pm
hehe... I had the same problem. You have to use the "[]" tags instead of the "<>" tags.

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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by Kreator » Tue Jun 10, 2008 5:14 pm

LiL-DeViL wrote:I DONT UNDERSTAND
Posted by Kreator on Mon Jun 09, 2008 2:15 pm
hehe... I had the same problem. You have to use the "[]" tags instead of the "<>" tags.

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the guy in the pic is me and i didnt say i wasn't the guy on the bike.


Oh... Sorry, but I thought that you could use html on this forum... Apparently you have to use BBCode...
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by Perfect Kid7 » Tue Jun 10, 2008 5:24 pm

Yea, BBCode is the only one that works.

You're tracks are okay, but you definitely aren't at the top. Keep working.
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Re: The Adventures (as promised) :P

PostPosted by LiL-DeViL » Thu Jun 12, 2008 8:03 am

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