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[THE PENGUINs]

California Redwood by THEPENGUINs

Extremely heavy on the scenery, that's how I detailed back then, it's an old map, hope you like it.

My largest track. Please thumbs up guys, I really appreciate it.

[JohnnySZS]

Finally, a decent length track from you! <3

Everything was amazing, but the one thing I have to comment about is the tree after the goal. It looked weird to me... but maybe that's just me.

[bts]

Wow.
Amazing.
And now your chars is at 12k.
Congrats
I love your detail style !!

[THE PENGUINs]

Finally, a decent length track from you! <3

Everything was amazing, but the one thing I have to comment about is the tree after the goal. It looked weird to me... but maybe that's just me.

You've gotta be more specific, I made almost all these trees like 9 months ago so most aren't up to par.

and bts, that 12m, with an 'm'

[Plastic]

I loved the part to the left of the start with the rocks. To me, that looked the best.
Some of it wasn't up to par. The background at the beginning looked a little funky, but the lake halfway through looked amazing. The contrast between the trees and their leaves was a little weird too.

Also, I wish the track was rideable. I know thats not your goal, but it's just a plus.

+1 in all, It's a great track. Very beautiful. Good job.

[THE PENGUINs]

I liked the beginning mountains, they were different, but I understand that. The trees on the lake we done a while ago, I wasn't planning on detailing them, so I did them in scenery, but yesterday I decided to, I would've made them in black lines in i had known, but I just went along with it.

It's rideable, just not easy. Actually, there are some really cools tricks I've done on it. Once mR. aUto or someone sees it, it'll have a nice ghost.

thanks

[bts]

I stole this track off the penguins by Holliepops
I just felt like notifying.

[THE PENGUINs]

yeah I saw it, don't worry, with all the copied and stolen tracks of mine of there, I've learned not to care anymore.

[bts]

Okay.

[Abraham1]

Ive heard so much about this amazing redwoods and now i get to see it ;D
i love it...

[THE PENGUINs]

thanks.

[Red_line900]

Good job penguins How long did it take you to make it?

[EasternBiker]

/record... for now.

I like it a lot. The mountains at the beginning were marvelous, but the river was a downside. It looked like a melted avalanche. It was too big for the mtns and angled too far downward. The two forest parts were great, can't say anything about them;). The lake in between then looked great, including the trees along the side. One thing that didn't fit in at all was the tree at the end. It went from wide to thin too fast, the bark was a little funky and repetitive, the branches were too thin coming from the tree, and the shading was a little weird.

I know this is an old track, so I can't blame you. Overall, It's really good. And congrats on getting your new biggest track

[IamRider]

feature worthy definitely.
only criticism is that the detail standards of the trees dropped after the first open area, but the still looked quite awesome.
<3 it

[deadrising2]

Awesome, and great achievment +1