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PostPosted by THE PENGUINs » Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:21 am

California Redwood by THEPENGUINs

Extremely heavy on the scenery, that's how I detailed back then, it's an old map, hope you like it.

My largest track. Please thumbs up guys, I really appreciate it.
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by JohnnySZS » Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:23 am

Finally, a decent length track from you! <3

Everything was amazing, but the one thing I have to comment about is the tree after the goal. It looked weird to me... but maybe that's just me.
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by bts » Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:25 am

Wow.
Amazing.
And now your chars is at 12k.
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by THE PENGUINs » Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:41 am

JohnnySZS wrote:Finally, a decent length track from you! <3

Everything was amazing, but the one thing I have to comment about is the tree after the goal. It looked weird to me... but maybe that's just me.


You've gotta be more specific, I made almost all these trees like 9 months ago so most aren't up to par.

and bts, that 12m, with an 'm'
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by Plastic » Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:59 am

I loved the part to the left of the start with the rocks. To me, that looked the best.
Some of it wasn't up to par. The background at the beginning looked a little funky, but the lake halfway through looked amazing. The contrast between the trees and their leaves was a little weird too.

Also, I wish the track was rideable. I know thats not your goal, but it's just a plus.

+1 in all, It's a great track. Very beautiful. Good job.
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by THE PENGUINs » Sun Jan 29, 2012 5:04 am

I liked the beginning mountains, they were different, but I understand that. The trees on the lake we done a while ago, I wasn't planning on detailing them, so I did them in scenery, but yesterday I decided to, I would've made them in black lines in i had known, but I just went along with it.

It's rideable, just not easy. Actually, there are some really cools tricks I've done on it. Once mR. aUto or someone sees it, it'll have a nice ghost.

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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by bts » Sun Jan 29, 2012 5:17 am

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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by THE PENGUINs » Sun Jan 29, 2012 5:21 am

yeah I saw it, don't worry, with all the copied and stolen tracks of mine of there, I've learned not to care anymore.
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by bts » Sun Jan 29, 2012 5:26 am

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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by Abraham1 » Sun Jan 29, 2012 5:55 am

Ive heard so much about this amazing redwoods and now i get to see it ;D
i love it...
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by THE PENGUINs » Sun Jan 29, 2012 6:26 am

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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by Red_line900 » Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:39 am

Good job penguins ;) How long did it take you to make it?
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by EasternBiker » Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:46 am

/record... for now.

I like it a lot. The mountains at the beginning were marvelous, but the river was a downside. It looked like a melted avalanche. It was too big for the mtns and angled too far downward. The two forest parts were great, can't say anything about them;). The lake in between then looked great, including the trees along the side. One thing that didn't fit in at all was the tree at the end. It went from wide to thin too fast, the bark was a little funky and repetitive, the branches were too thin coming from the tree, and the shading was a little weird.

I know this is an old track, so I can't blame you. Overall, It's really good. And congrats on getting your new biggest track :)
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by IamRider » Sun Jan 29, 2012 11:23 am

feature worthy definitely.
only criticism is that the detail standards of the trees dropped after the first open area, but the still looked quite awesome.
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Re: California Redwood

PostPosted by deadrising2 » Sun Jan 29, 2012 11:41 am

Awesome, and great achievment +1
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