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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by Egghead » Mon Jan 30, 2012 2:50 am

i will be able to give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on tracks!
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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by Colorado » Sat Feb 04, 2012 7:17 am

No and no.
Sorry guys. Maybe stay on here a bit longer and show me you can.

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PostPosted by spedexx_19 » Sat Feb 04, 2012 8:39 am

Hmm. Can i join? ;)
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PostPosted by Tacomonster » Sat Feb 11, 2012 1:51 am

Colorado wrote:No and no.
Sorry guys. Maybe stay on here a bit longer and show me you can.

@taco I can teach you. :3

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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by pma » Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:20 am

Am I still in le critiquing club?
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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by ap1254 » Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:33 am

am i aloud to be in?
i believe i give some pretty good CC
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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by Colorado » Sat Feb 11, 2012 4:18 am

Everyone in the list is in PMA.

@ap you knew what made the track better in "the thing i" topic. But you would want to explain what you did and how to improve it like what you showed.
Keep on CCing for a couple weeks and I'll let you in.
Sound fair?

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PostPosted by JohnnySZS » Sat Feb 11, 2012 4:37 am

I'll take a shot at applying :P I'm terrible at detailing myself, and I don't have a gallery or anything, but I know what's a good track and what's not, and I know what people need to work on to make their tracks look/flow better :P
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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by ap1254 » Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:01 am

Colorado wrote:Everyone in the list is in PMA.

@ap you knew what made the track better in "the thing i" topic. But you would want to explain what you did and how to improve it like what you showed.
Keep on CCing for a couple weeks and I'll let you in.
Sound fair?

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i wasnt trying to give CC because i could have typed a whole paragraph for it, i just fixed up the track
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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by LoL » Sat Feb 11, 2012 10:27 am

I don't really see the point of this, but I'd like to join anyways :D
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PostPosted by Enzoart » Sat Feb 11, 2012 12:07 pm

LoL wrote:I don't really see the point of this, but I'd like to join anyways :D
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PostPosted by Gamionist » Sat Feb 11, 2012 12:26 pm

Count me in.
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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by pma » Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:51 pm

Colorado wrote:Everyone in the list is in PMA.


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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by ap1254 » Mon Feb 13, 2012 2:53 am

this is some CC i gave on gfdgfd12's auto
i would suggest not using mtb, it makes it way harder to make smooth
it was pretty good for a first auto
i think that it was smooth to begin but then it turned to bumpy
i think that you should take more time to make the bike flow better on the lines
its pretty hard to do sometimes but i guess all you can do is practice that
also, i think it should be a little longer
it was good for a first auto, but it could still be better
just keep practicing, thats all im saying
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Re: Critiquing Club

PostPosted by Colorado » Mon Feb 13, 2012 4:27 am

Great. Now do that consistently for 2 weeks.
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