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atc entry-version 2 released

PostPosted by fried_rider » Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:36 am

i now made the lab more "labish"
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Re: atc entry

PostPosted by Colorado » Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:09 am

The beginning was good but the lab looked rushed. I suggest you clean it up and add more rock detail.
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Re: atc entry

PostPosted by My name is » Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:33 am

its ok.
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Re: atc entry

PostPosted by TheCrypt » Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:39 am

You really really really really need to work on your mountains.
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Re: atc entry

PostPosted by Febrezeee Man » Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:48 am

Colorado wrote:The beginning was good but the lab looked rushed. I suggest you clean it up and add more rock detail.
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Re: atc entry

PostPosted by deadrising2 » Sun Jan 23, 2011 10:07 am

Febrezeee Man wrote:
Colorado wrote:The beginning was good but the lab looked rushed. I suggest you clean it up and add more rock detail.


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Re: atc entry

PostPosted by Honza 47 » Sun Jan 23, 2011 11:26 am

Track was ok,but details sucks.
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Re: atc entry

PostPosted by Shawds009 » Sun Jan 23, 2011 11:33 am

I see a bit of other style in there.
My style, from this track
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Re: atc entry

PostPosted by fried_rider » Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:08 am

it my orginal style shawds, and im going to make better version today
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Re: atc entry-version 2

PostPosted by fried_rider » Mon Jan 24, 2011 11:09 am

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Re: atc entry-version 2 released

PostPosted by fried_rider » Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:56 pm

any comments for v2?
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Re: atc entry-version 2 released

PostPosted by My name is » Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:15 pm

i like it
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Re: atc entry-version 2 released

PostPosted by deadrising2 » Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:16 pm

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Re: atc entry-version 2 released

PostPosted by fried_rider » Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:36 pm

deadrising2 wrote:I see no Change

look at the lab part
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Re: atc entry-version 2 released

PostPosted by deadrising2 » Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:45 pm

Ohh, yeah. not that Noticable. btw Check My Gall. it has a pic of me
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