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PostPosted by zflakhn » Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:59 pm

xD Just finished my first hold up and wanna get some opinions on it. Ok it may not be, as insane as I say, but personally I think its actually good for a first. But, hey :D I made it lol. So thats why I want others opinions. Here it is

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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by mikel31 » Thu Mar 11, 2010 1:14 pm

amazing, very fast.
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PostPosted by ToxicMahem » Thu Mar 11, 2010 1:41 pm

the hold up was pretty awesome, the auto left something to be desired.
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by zflakhn » Thu Mar 11, 2010 1:57 pm

ToxicMahem wrote:the hold up was pretty awesome, the auto left something to be desired.


xD I dont know what that was about with the auto but I'm guessing it isnt bad :)

and thanks.

this was my first hold up auto. and really first auto aswell haha :)

and I can still add another few things to this one to make it better lol. I am thinking of doing it actually.
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by apollo » Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:40 pm

sweet hold up.
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by mR..AuTo » Thu Mar 11, 2010 3:26 pm

the hold up is sick. =D keep at it and you'll get real good man
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by Aries » Thu Mar 11, 2010 3:38 pm

Epic, Fantastic, Fast


What an auto should be,

Maybe you can join up the lines next time, it might look more Pro
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by zflakhn » Thu Mar 11, 2010 10:11 pm

ok :D

Thanks for the tips guys

and most definately your opinions :s_smile

I would like to detail this track still just, to make it look visually appealing. Just need to think of what to detail it with :D
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PostPosted by Aries » Thu Mar 11, 2010 10:13 pm

Your favourite banana.

Your special cake.

Your dream of epic pink pears.

Inspiration happens when you least expect it.
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by T_rexxatron rawr!;; » Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:40 pm

that was epicnesssss.
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by Ekulhawk » Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:55 pm

make the auto better and detail and it will be feature worthy
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by WhenNatureCalls » Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:50 am

this is TWBM for sure
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by TheZengo » Fri Mar 12, 2010 7:34 am

Make it a bit longer and its featurable for me.
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by *ROCKSTAR* » Fri Mar 12, 2010 7:35 am

pretty desent the hold up but not so much auto
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Re: Insane hold up

PostPosted by zflakhn » Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:19 pm

*ROCKSTAR* wrote:pretty desent the hold up but not so much auto


Ok. So, from what I have read I need to increase the length of the hold up and make the auto alot longer and better. :s_smile thanks for your tips/opinions/suggestions guys. xD
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