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[uncfan]

Following a trend.

Track's pretty short, but I wanted to try some detail.

Sunset Stroll by uncfan : PLAY / PREVIEW

What do you guys think?

[Random_Kiwi]

Nice...very smooth and flowy...what's with these scenery detailed tracks inside odd shaped boxes though? I don't get it, either a track in a box, or a mountain track, combining them is just odd

[The Promised One]

Solitary confinement(mtbboy)
Lake Detail [MTB](Albinoblacksheep)

[Aries]

You've also forgot Stig Shameful copying, if you did copy, you could have at least copied well because the scene wasn't too great.

[weldothewise8]

too many noobs doing this style
there just copies

[Ravee]

dude i made one way before those chaps, except stig.

[mikel31]

i like the smoothness, but not the mountains.

[apollo]

eh. same premise as illusive superrider and solitary confinement. worse detail.nono.

[uncfan]

Yeah, I'm a copier. Kill me. Well, kinda. I didn't really know how to do the mtns.

And how were the mountains bad?

[Aries]

They looked like piles of poop.

[Aries]

Delete this post.

[Aries]

Lol.

You want contructive Crit?

Here it goes.

1. Join your lines
2. Try not to copy people
3. Practise DOES make perfect.
4. Make your own style
5. Give Ground Detail, Object Detail and Background Detail ( This may not be needed, it all depends on type of track )

Work on this and you might get featured.

[uncfan]

there's not that many ways to draw a mountain.

Lol.

You want contructive Crit?

Here it goes.

1. Join your lines
2. Try not to copy people
3. Practise DOES make perfect.
4. Make your own style
5. Give Ground Detail, Object Detail and Background Detail ( This may not be needed, it all depends on type of track )

Work on this and you might get featured.

[T_rexxatron rawr!;;]

i thought the track was fairly decent.

[Ekulhawk]

I like the detail anad the track if you make a track like that with ground detail it would be an awesome track