Tribute to Insïght

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Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by synapse » Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:55 am

So this is for Turnik's FR2L II contest. I played a lot and looked a lot of Insïght's tracks and made a track inspired by his style. I think overall it came out pretty goood, but you guys can decide for yourself. Comments and Features appreciated! :D


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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by weldothewise8 » Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:03 am

way too messy, and the curves were too sharp
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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by twinfin » Wed Mar 10, 2010 5:02 am

I actually thought it was pretty fun :)
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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by AlbinoBlacksheep » Wed Mar 10, 2010 5:03 am

I liked it!
Better than I could EVER do.
And I feached it :)
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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by synapse » Wed Mar 10, 2010 5:05 am

Thank you!
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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by ChrisTheBiker » Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:46 am

weldothewise8 wrote:way too messy, and the curves were too sharp


otherwise it was good
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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by Aries » Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:55 pm

Sketchy, messy, too sharp, not much detail

I liked it - No really, i did.
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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by rpgmaster » Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:35 pm

sweet track!
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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by Splendid » Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:56 pm

Aries wrote:Sketchy, messy, too sharp, not much detail

I liked it - No really, i did.


Me too, except I didn't like it ... Sorry. But it's a tribute, it makes it a lot better already.

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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by ForVotingPurposes » Wed Mar 10, 2010 10:57 pm

I thought the detail was almost good, and the track was almost good too.

you just need to make smoother landings if your going for flow, which is what I think you were going for. Detail, don't double line things.

Stig and LDP and all the other greatgreatgreat detailers do not double line on their featured tracks.

Just clean it up.

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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by Isenki » Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:09 pm

I liked that the track wasn't completely flowy, actually. I actually had to work at some of those jumps.
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Re: Tribute to Insïght

PostPosted by synapse » Thu Mar 11, 2010 3:34 am

Yeah, I mean flow wise I was going for just what Insight does where it is somewhat difficult jumps. I was trying to do his detail. My detail is a lot different that his but if you take a look at The Ride by him you will see a lot of resemblances in my track. Thanks for all the critiques though!
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