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Fun track but detail needs work, what are those spiky platform things we keep riding on? Are they rocks or tree branches? I can't tell.

[Aries]

There obvs rocks. How does the detail need work.

Constructed please

[Ekulhawk]

Nice job guys! Some of the bg detail needed work but other than that it was a good track.

Yeah i agree the detail was kinda sketchy but the track was fun. feach

[Aries]

Thanks

BTW


Bumpty Bump bump

[Xeagle art]

Nice job guys! Some of the bg detail needed work but other than that it was a good track.

Yeah i agree the detail was kinda sketchy but the track was fun. feach

thanks for the feach


@ aries you need 15 feaches from a non superuser for a feached track

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There obvs rocks. How does the detail need work.

Constructed please

Alright well, Have you ever seen rocks that come to a fine point and hang in mid-air like that? You gotta think about physics a little bit. if that was a real rock the tip would break when you were riding on it. To do rock detail try looking up some pictures of rocks, cliffs and that kind of thing to get an idea of what to draw. I didn't mean to sound like an ass, I am trying to give you some constructive criticism, don't be offended please!

[Aries]

I figured it might be that.

I have seen rocks like that

On some of them you can see that there held up by rocks.

Maybe the rock can break on my next track

[Xeagle art]

I figured it might be that.

I have seen rocks like that

On some of them you can see that there held up by rocks.

Maybe the rock can break on my next track

or the v.2

[Aries]

That is correctomundo by friend.

Yes it is true, we are currently working on a version 2 of our collab, lets see how many feachs will have at Mo.

11 feachs so far

We need 4 more or a vip to look at this track.

Spread it like butter!

[Xeagle art]

^i'll work on it

[Xeagle art]

bump

comments?

and v.2 is coming soon

btw aries i pm'ed you

[Vapaa]

I love Aries´s detail style, background sucked a bit though.

[Xeagle art]

I love Aries´s detail style, background sucked a bit though.

he said in the v.2 it won't be as "sketchy"

[Aries]

What im going to do is join up the track Xeagle then have a break, do the ground detail. Have a break, then do scenary. It should look mich better that way.

[Vapaa]

Double grammar fial?