Could be better. Smoothness isnt one of your attributes, is it? Sorry, but i wouldnt feach, needs more flow i think...and it got kinda boring...
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i thought it was fairly decent. the track i really liked, but i thought it lacked a bit of detail to tie things together.
good job overall!
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Vapaamatkustajuuteen wrote:Don´t correct Phil, it is blasphemy.
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If you want to tribute to lust, you SERIOUSLY need to work on your lines. Like they have to be a smooth curve, not flat in some places. For the landings, you should make them more slanted, it makes it alot smoother. Some parts of the ramps stuck out without any scaffolding holding them up...?