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[Toxicity]

Hey guys, here's my new hold up for Xeagle's contest!
What do you think?

plz comment, rate, feedback, feach...



Tropical H^ by Toxicity : PLAY / PREVIEW

[Scion]

Schweet.

[Toxicity]

thx

[ToxicMahem]

ok.

[plastic pineapple]

didnt like.
all it is is flips. got kinda repative.
and its more of a ns than tropical.
and work on you detail where the rocks/land meet with the water. that part ruined it.

[Toxicity]

how can i improve on that part?

[Lust]

Seemed very repetitive and un-controlled.

[ToxicMahem]

your detail could be improved, the rest of the ground looks a little empy... try making the water hit the land... it just looks like the land is on top of the water and the water is way back in the bg.
your clouds are small and wimp, they kinda fail
also, put some shading in the water since you ahve the sun.
if you've ever looked at water when the suns out you can see that gleam.
also, work on making your auto more controlled and less flippy...
try to add some more tricks in there.


Thats what I said on msn.
I was too busy to bother earlier.

[Toxicity]

Seemed very un-controlled.

its called an unstability based hold up

[plastic pineapple]

Seemed very un-controlled.

its called an unstability based hold up

thats stupid

[Lust]

Seemed very un-controlled.

its called an unstability based hold up

No, it's call un-controlled.

[Toxicity]

ok, sorry if you didnt like it ill try to improve... and thanks toxic...

[T_rexxatron rawr!;;]

tbh, the collab that I'm doing with tracks on crack is going to pwn.

all conceitedness aside, it was ok. kinda blaaaaaah

[synapse]

Scenery could use a little work.
Featured anyways

[Vapaa]

The H^up was quite ok.
But the water just didn´t look like water, because you have just put a scenery line as horizon.
And with Tropical, I expected palms...